My fingers just keep going with this one; just comment and tell me what you think about it.
Falling never touch the ground,
Feet hovering on this concrete that is life,
Each word full of hurt and fight,
"I shot her because she looked at me wrong"
Loud scream she wrote her last song,
Big white dress pedals down the isle,
He got her best friend and 3 hoes on speed dial,
She stays because love conquers all
Watch out for infatuation the everlasting downfall
Papers are signed and Johnny has 2 homes
Drugs, Sex, and Alcohol is all he'll ever know
16 now and he falls in love with a woman 23
Returning home between the hours of 1 and 3
Diploma in his hand and a full scholarship to Yale
Search online your moms body is for sale
Hunger to be a generational interruption
One word spoken to give a mind blown eruption
She said that "L" word that causes so much fear,
The word that brings peace to someones ear
Vows are exchanged and "I do's" flourish
Face your fears and give it your all lips nourish
Nourish all the words the mind that believes for you
They lived happily ever after, dreams do come true...
I had to read this twice... there is so much going on. I'm thinking this ended positively? Like you are noting that they had their struggles in life... the had ups and down... but yet at the end of it all, their story ended happily? Idk that is what I got from it!! I really liked it. You have a gift Jahbria!!! You really do! I pray that you use your gift for God's glory!! God Bless !
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